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12 October 2009 @ 09:18 pm
picture show  
picture show, onew/key, R, 370 words


a/n: I might continue this fic one day, but I don't really know, so it's a drabble for now. Written for scylladakylla. HAPPY 21ST BIRTHDAY, SCYLLA. YOU ARE THE BEST! ♥






picture show:

They're making out in the bathroom when Taemin opens the door. They don't notice him, at first. It seems to Taemin to be a very long time.

Snapshot: Jinki is smiling slightly, eyes closed, looking quite content with Kibum sucking on his bottom lip. Very calm, considering his pants are unzipped and Kibum is practically humping his leg, except, wait, those are his hands on Kibum's ass, his hips jerking forward, and he's trembling all over so maybe not.

Kibum pulls back just far enough to meet Jinki's eyes, mouth drawn into a frown. "Yah, hyung," he says softly. "You feel like you're about to spontaneously combust."

Jinki promptly replies, "Oou, you touched my tra-la-la," and grins when Kibum fails not to laugh and drops his face into Jinki's shoulder.

"God," Kibum says, pulling closer. "You're so weird."

Jinki blows a light puff of air against his ear. "Try not to worry, Kibum-ah."

"...he said hypocritically," Kibum says. He looks up and makes a great show of pouting before he goes breathless and closes his eyes at the feeling of Jinki's hands pulling him in. "Why are you like this," he mumbles, trailing fingers down Jinki's stomach and smiling. "This is the part where you're supposed to slip over some sort of phantom hole in the ground, you know?"

Jinki grins and whispers, "Sorry," and Kibum's hand is halfway into his boxers, and then there's this tiny, subtle CLICK that signals the end of the world.

Taemin meets Jinki's eyes for a split second before he carefully lets the latch reengage and steps back out into the hall. He slides down the outside of the bathroom door, wide-eyed.

There is silence for a long time, and then, "I thought you locked the door," Kibum says. "Fuck."

Jinki goes, "But I... oh God. I'm sorry, Kibum."

"Fuck you."

"I'm really, really sorry."

"Shit. I mean, what can--" Kibum's voice breaks. "Hyung."

"Yeah," Jinki says shakily. He's trying so hard to smile that Taemin can hear it through the wood. "We never... like, never even got to use that excuse for missing practice! The one with the ramyun conspiracy and the yakuza boss...? Remember that, Kibum-ah?"

Kibum laughs a little, but then he is crying.

It's hysterical.
 
 
 
jaybomb on October 13th, 2009 02:38 am (UTC)
"Oou, you touched my tra-la-la,"

Oh. oh my god.

CONTINUE THIS. YOU MUST.
diefastandharddiefastandhard on October 13th, 2009 02:41 am (UTC)
This just... amazing LOL. ♥
n a n a ___ b ☆coffee_appeal on October 13th, 2009 02:56 am (UTC)
ZAMAZING. <3

AHAHAHAH. Is it just me or does Shinee's comeback sog remind anyone of that song that goes, "You touch my ta-la-la, my DING DING DONG"? Gosh, I cracked up so badly.

This fic is epic. OH SO EPIC, TAEMIN YOU SNEAK XDD
在你的世界降落。: onew // you make me smile.lazychaoz on October 13th, 2009 03:12 am (UTC)
you made my day. :D

motherfucking project. >>;
joonbijoonbi on October 13th, 2009 03:17 am (UTC)
lmao, idek, this is amazing. i can completely imagine this. your characters are so perfect. ♥
scylladakyllascylladakylla on October 13th, 2009 03:18 am (UTC)
Alksjdflksdjlfsf so you already know how awesome I think this is. ♥
whut.pumadragon on October 13th, 2009 03:19 am (UTC)
CONTINUES REREADING SEXY PARAGRAPH
koalascookies on October 13th, 2009 04:03 am (UTC)
PAHAHHAAH
OH GOD.
The tralala part just killed me. Way too hilarious. Wide-eyed corrupted Taemin too lmfao *-*
CONTINUE PLEASE?
With cookies on top? :D
cherry blossom girlhyungdeul on October 13th, 2009 04:40 am (UTC)
PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S MORE ;__;
govern by IMAGINATION...901younha108 on October 13th, 2009 04:56 am (UTC)
this is so...SEXY..

continue this..more of this please..
yukihanakim on October 13th, 2009 05:33 am (UTC)
omg this is osm O//O
tiggie0307tiggie0307 on October 13th, 2009 06:09 am (UTC)
I'm enjoying SHINee fics more and more latly. Thank you for this.

And poor Taemin!
trying to fix what's damagedread0write on October 13th, 2009 06:26 am (UTC)
OMG!!!!

please continue...

gotta know how they explain this to taemin...there have to be some kind of aftermath XD

lol those two getting frisky in the bathroom...

onkey love ♥
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~Nuile~: oopsnuile on October 13th, 2009 05:31 pm (UTC)
MY.DEVIL.
It's not only hot. It's also... true to life in some oddly beautiful way 0_0 It's so... Oh mY!
Thank you for writing this!!
viv.: (onew) i'm high on you.almightybrows on October 14th, 2009 01:05 am (UTC)
I'm supposed to be studying for this major test that I have tomorrow, but you know, onkey comes first :)

I absolutely loooooooooved it ♥ So adorable ;; /squishes you & otp.
luctusandified on October 14th, 2009 02:55 am (UTC)
dfghj
GET OUT.
this is amazing :D
☆ multiply。andivide on October 14th, 2009 03:55 am (UTC)
I FIND THIS SAD AND IDK WHY write more, k. ♥
whut.pumadragon on October 14th, 2009 03:56 am (UTC)
wanna know a secret? it's supposed to be sad. :|
whut.pumadragon on October 14th, 2009 03:56 am (UTC)
AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING, OMG. YOU ARE VERY WONDERFUL. ♥
☆ multiply。andivide on October 14th, 2009 04:02 am (UTC)
i usually save this phrase for mujyakina but i feel you deserve it. WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS KLJNAKS//as,.m.kmklasf..., :[

bribes you to continue it? :]??? ♥
whut.: text: but what if i fail? :(pumadragon on October 15th, 2009 07:06 am (UTC)
i... but... o____o um. withers away
#1 nautical platypus: bling blingnautisch on October 14th, 2009 05:57 am (UTC)
sobbing THEY ARE SO PATHETIC. but in such a good way, this was perfect and adorable and oh, so them. :3
Sarah: 샤이니 ■ talk to me dance with meheechul_oppa on October 15th, 2009 07:09 pm (UTC)
YOU.

D: Why are you so awesome.
Sarah: Other ■ in a minute (a fucking minute)heechul_oppa on October 15th, 2009 07:10 pm (UTC)
But like, idk, I got more of this hollow, empty-ish feeling after AND I HATE YOU FOR THAT BTW, but like. IT SEEMS LIKE IT SHOULD BE HAPPY. But then it leaves me feeling like this and your writing has got me all screwed up and and and.

hdu.
Shin Ha Younganggie_sam on October 17th, 2009 03:46 pm (UTC)
ne minnie, try what onkey did with minho LOL
more organs means more human.: shinee ☆ ontaaaaaeeephasera on October 18th, 2009 04:30 am (UTC)
sobbing. ;_________; </3
Ludwig van Beethoven: DUBUunsospiro on October 18th, 2009 09:21 am (UTC)
I love when people keep Onew in character <3333
noellenoelledominique on December 3rd, 2009 12:46 pm (UTC)
this. ;_; ♥ oh god. love this. I MISS YOUR WRITING. you're such a good writer, all of us want you to write more!

and oh, taemin's so presh. D: ♥ and onew, oh onew. lmfao. this was funny and sexy at the same time. idk how you do it.
tofugirlmayzeeacala on May 3rd, 2010 01:54 pm (UTC)
I think Minne Just died LOL :))
Please continue? *Insert Jong's puppy eye