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22 July 2009 @ 06:08 am
fragmentation  
Double drabble for shineeworld:

Fragmentation, PG-13, Onew/Key, 200 words


Cold man, dark room, "I want these rumors to stay rumors," door slam, fuck.

"Kibum-ah, it's not... I mean, I don't want--"

"Fuck, Jinki. What are we doing? I just."

"Yeah."

"I know that you--"

"I get it."

Big dreams, fleeting glances, flinging the world open wide and breathing in, out. Big, big dreams. He'd give it up for you, right? He'd give it all up, if only for a moment, with you.

"I can't let you lose this because of me."

"I wasn't going to--"

"Oh."

All you have to do in life is die. You could die alone, a sadly smiling star. He could die on a mountainside with you in his arms and wildflowers in his pockets. Or you could pretend forever and die of secondhand suffocation, waste away watching him drown.

"One day, one day."

"Yeah."

"I promise."

"Okay."

Fading feelings, sharp edges, little tears slipping between recordings. Tiny, tiny tears. He can't let them see. They won't let you breathe. Goodbye kisses, just one more, take a picture, it'll last longer. I MISS YOU. I MISS YOU. FUCK, HOW I MISS YOU.

"It's only love."

Rumors stay rumors, a round of applause.
 
 
 
more organs means more human.phasera on July 22nd, 2009 12:44 pm (UTC)
:( just go ahead and break my heart, why don't you.
Sarah: Anime ■ i'm pink and black and blueheechul_oppa on July 22nd, 2009 04:33 pm (UTC)
;-; Why do you have to be so ninja? Guh. You write this and I can't even get my thoughts coherent enough to leave a proper comment. WHY SO AWESOME. I'm envious.

Must say though, I love the semi-disjointed, broken feeling it gives. Angst makes me cry, but well-written angst makes me cry happily. (I AM SOBBING JOYFULLY, JSYK.) Guh.

/lovefest
scylladakyllascylladakylla on July 22nd, 2009 04:40 pm (UTC)
... DDDDDD:

When I said write Onkey, I meant long, HAPPY Onkey that doesn't break my heart. ;_;
shii: ;A;conditionally on July 22nd, 2009 05:18 pm (UTC)
The title suits the drabble perfectly. A lot of this is disjointed and the dialogue and oh my heart is a sad mess now, kthx ;___; ♥
ghostdrop on August 1st, 2009 11:50 am (UTC)
Dear noelliex,
I worship your writing. Please update more.
Preferably every day.
Ty, ghostdrop